Sorry, this just won't do:
Surviving Bee Gees say to reunite for live shows
First of all, "Bee Gees say to reunite"? I don't get the verb at all. Second, just the surviving members? Live shows? Yawn. Let's fix this sucker!:
Surviving Bee Gees said to reunite for live shows; those not surviving will reunite for undead shows
There. Much better.
4 comments:
Zombie Bee Gees! Now that would be worth the price of admission.
Whether you're a brother or whether you're a mother,
you're stayin' undead, stayin' undead.
Feel the city breakin' and everybody shakin',
and we're stayin' undead, stayin' undead.
Ah, ha, ha, ha, stayin' undead, stayin' undead.
Ah, ha, ha, ha, stayin' undeaaaaaaaad.
My baby moves at midnight
Goes right on till the dawn
My woman takes me higher
My undead keeps me warm
What you doin on your back aah
What you doin on your back aah?
You should be dancing, yeah
Dancing, yeah
She's juicy and she's trouble
She gets it to me good
My zombie gives me power
Goes right down to my blood
You should be dancing, yeah
You should be voodooing, yeah
You should be peeling flesh off human dead, yeah
You should be munching, yeah
You should be dancing, yeah
the headline probably started its life as:
"surviving Bee Gees say they'll reunite"
and it was too long.
Incomplete editing while cutting characters.
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